Saturday, January 31, 2009

BEATLEJUICE...

I'm not Burton, and this isn't horror I write about. A musical. A screenplay, short one that's a bit lyrical, more or less. Hope you enjoy the first few moments of it :)

HERE GOES…



(Straight road – highway. Fast moving wheels, two, three, four, six, eight, more. Youth sitting inside one such speeding, white, small car, tourist vehicle. Sits right at the centre of the back-seat, pensive. Music playing low in the background – radio. Racy music, yet low in sound, quiet. Driver minding just his job. Windows shut, air conditioners on:

Plain silence…)


I’ve never been able

to explain, the pain

of falling in love…

Scintillating a sensation,

Inexplicable:

Beyond human ration…

You do try

to figure out why

you feel that tortuous

jab about your gut;

But, sometimes

you ask your,

insubstantial core,

as I ask mine now…


“Could this be love…?”


(Darkness – Total black, as compared to the previous Black and White combination. Closure of eyes of the protagonist to indicate the shift of scene, a touch of memories passing right before his eyes – events of the day, for he stood at the end of it. Could even be a couple of days; or a week… But still, it’s a flashback.)


2 comments:

Meenakshi Janga said...

Got a deja-vu feeling while reading it. Can somehow totally relate to those few lines of poetry. Beautifully penned down.

Karthik Purushothaman said...

Maybe.. You know if you felt so about this one, maybe you ought to read a more creative piece of mine like ROZARIO which is a love story in reverse, or maybe even my recent SUN-EYED GIRL... :)

Thanks anyway, MJ :D