HERE GOES…
(Straight road – highway. Fast moving wheels, two, three, four, six, eight, more. Youth sitting inside one such speeding, white, small car, tourist vehicle. Sits right at the centre of the back-seat, pensive. Music playing low in the background – radio. Racy music, yet low in sound, quiet. Driver minding just his job. Windows shut, air conditioners on:
Plain silence…)
I’ve never been able
to explain, the pain
of falling in love…
Scintillating a sensation,
Inexplicable:
Beyond human ration…
You do try
to figure out why
you feel that tortuous
jab about your gut;
But, sometimes
you ask your,
insubstantial core,
as I ask mine now…
“Could this be love…?”
(Darkness – Total black, as compared to the previous Black and White combination. Closure of eyes of the protagonist to indicate the shift of scene, a touch of memories passing right before his eyes – events of the day, for he stood at the end of it. Could even be a couple of days; or a week… But still, it’s a flashback.)
2 comments:
Got a deja-vu feeling while reading it. Can somehow totally relate to those few lines of poetry. Beautifully penned down.
Maybe.. You know if you felt so about this one, maybe you ought to read a more creative piece of mine like ROZARIO which is a love story in reverse, or maybe even my recent SUN-EYED GIRL... :)
Thanks anyway, MJ :D
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